Wednesday, January 19, 2011

1st draft by steven and brad


Camera focused on Fighter, centered

Fighter contemplating/meditating. Sitting on chair, resting forearms on knees, looking down with a grim look. Focusing on breathing.

One single drip from his nose, hits his hand. White smokey substance flows out of his nose, wraps around his head.

The smoke substance changes and overwhelms the world around him, leaving him in an ominous world of white.

Suddenly, realizing that the chair he was sitting on is gone, falls a distance to the ground.

The world around him closes in on the fighter. The fighter becomes confused and in doubt of his unexpected encounter with the changing world.

Something unknown rises from the ground and grabs his ankle and pulls him into the ground like quick sand.

Fighter resists and tries to pull out.

Shit just got real.

Within an instant, the world around him suddenly attacks him and the fighter swiftly rolls away and dodges the first attack.

Right at that moment he stops rolling, an unexpected giant blow knocks him flying toward a wall at high speed in far distance.

As the fighter's back slams into a hard surface, dust flies. Then this hard surface suddenly turns into a goo-like surface and is attached to him as he falls like a giant gum on his back.

As he hits the ground, the goo-like gum still attached to his back stretches. In realization that the gum is still attached to him, he hurriedly runs forward and the gum snaps.

The fighter stands stops and takes a moment to realize that this threatening, obscure world is trying to kill him.

The ground starts to shake and a giant fist (the size of his upper torso) erupts and hits him right in the stomach.

As the fighter jets toward to the sky with the unknown material trailing in his path of direction, simultaneously, he vomits the same material the world consists of.

Once the fist comes in contact with the fighter, we begin to see it in slow motion.

Cuts to a close-up scene of him vomiting the substance that makes up the world.

Cuts to the original scene where the fist is in the shot, still in slow motion, the fist continues to grow out from the ground, revealing parts of the forearm. In this scene, the fighter, still in the same position, wields the sword and goes flying toward the sky as the fist stays in position.

Fighters body is thrown so fast and with much power, that his body scales down in the distance. With a moment of silence, we begin to make out the fighter's body coming back down at high speed ready to swing his sword.

The fighter slashes the fist and cuts down all the way through like scissors through fabric, cutting the fist in two halves.

After the fighter lands, he looks up and realizes the two halves collapse and melt back into the ground.

The fighter drops his sword, thinking the fight is over and walks away.

Camera shot - sword up front to the camera, fighter at a distance.

The sword begins to melt and meshes with the ground again, but at an instance morphs into a serpent-like creature.

As the creature hisses, the fighter turns around, charges toward the creature as he closes his eyes.

Ending 1

Leaps to tackle the creature and breaks through a wall. As the walls crack like an eggshell, the real world starts to reveal itself. He turns completely white.

Ending 2

Leaps to tackle the creature and breaks through a wall. As the walls crack like an eggshell, the real world starts to reveal itself. He turns completely white.

The wall pieces on the ground turn back into the smoke like substance that originally comes out of him. The smoke starts going back into his nostrils showing his new self. Cuts mid nostril entrance. BOOM MOTHAFUCKA!





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