I like it but the movement is too consistent to be real. What I mean by that is that the rocks are all falling at the same speed and in the same amount. Have parts where very few rocks fall, then all of a sudden a lot fall, then die down again. Have it vary.
Think about in cartoons when something is cracking, like someone punching a wall, it starts off as one crack, then 5 cracks form really fast, then one crack, then 6.
I like it but the movement is too consistent to be real. What I mean by that is that the rocks are all falling at the same speed and in the same amount. Have parts where very few rocks fall, then all of a sudden a lot fall, then die down again. Have it vary.
ReplyDeleteThink about in cartoons when something is cracking, like someone punching a wall, it starts off as one crack, then 5 cracks form really fast, then one crack, then 6.