i like these shots! i think some of the shapes can me a bit more organic though... not all, like maybe tweak 25 % of the individual pieces. do you know what i mean? the overall feel/motion is right on though.
I think something more in action and depth, at this point the ground is already shaking and pieces are already falling, so the rocks should be in acton already and not just starting to break, falling towards him and he should be smaller and farther away. Some pieces might already have reach the ground tho, connecting from the last shot and adds more depth.
thanks, guys! I'm going to keep all the feedback in mind and change it once we gather a rough cut together and see how it looks in sequence. (with the animations)
i like these shots! i think some of the shapes can me a bit more organic though... not all, like maybe tweak 25 % of the individual pieces. do you know what i mean? the overall feel/motion is right on though.
ReplyDeleteI think something more in action and depth, at this point the ground is already shaking and pieces are already falling, so the rocks should be in acton already and not just starting to break, falling towards him and he should be smaller and farther away. Some pieces might already have reach the ground tho, connecting from the last shot and adds more depth.
ReplyDeletethanks, guys!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to keep all the feedback in mind and change it once we gather a rough cut together and see how it looks in sequence. (with the animations)