The aesthetics for this are too outdated. This type of work was oversaturated in the motion design industry from 2005-2008. The thing I see working is the background having a water color feel otherwise, having illustrated flourishes is too trite and weak.
Also, these are way too similar to the references you posted. You didn't change enough and I don't want the original artist to see this so I prefer this is taken down.
I see where you were going with it, and yeah I agree with Eric regardless of his semi-constructive criticism.
It is a bit decorative, I think we want more ambiguity.
But good track I feel you're tapping into the state of nirvana with these examples. Nirvana is what this whole piece is about in a way, anyway. But I think we could obscure that feeling/mood.
The aesthetics for this are too outdated. This type of work was oversaturated in the motion design industry from 2005-2008. The thing I see working is the background having a water color feel otherwise, having illustrated flourishes is too trite and weak.
ReplyDeleteAlso, these are way too similar to the references you posted. You didn't change enough and I don't want the original artist to see this so I prefer this is taken down.
I see where you were going with it, and yeah I agree with Eric regardless of his semi-constructive criticism.
ReplyDeleteIt is a bit decorative, I think we want more ambiguity.
But good track I feel you're tapping into the state of nirvana with these examples. Nirvana is what this whole piece is about in a way, anyway. But I think we could obscure that feeling/mood.